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This is SOLID music right here. I'm not even into metal!

I love the countermelodies. Everything against one another worked really well. I especially like around 1:33 where everything comes in. I think the bass synth should have a little less "groove" in the beginning (or at least waited until later) I'm going to make a wild guess and say that you have a hip-hop background. But most of all, it did a good job of capturing the "video game" atmosphere. Great job!

Love the way that the beat came in. Love your voice too. I felt like the bass synth got in the way a bit. I would have kept the piano in the higher and/or equed it to fit the synth. Also try slapping some reverb on your voice (especially the backgrounds) and play with panning!

But musically, the melody of your verses are WAY strong. PLEASE keep writing songs. The music is INSANELY good. It's just some quality that gets in the way a bit. But the music is STRONG. Keep doing it, PLEASE!

aaronmusslewhite responds:

Thank you I'm glad you like the track!! There's a ton of panning actualy. The only thing center is kick snare and vocals. And I can see the bass being loud to people I was definitely trying to make an edgier feel to be complemented by the prettier parts. The piano I think is just high passed. I like really natural piano sounds so I don't do tooo much eq... It's mainly there to be a pretty part against the rawr edm bass haha. Thank you for the tips and advice tho I'll keep it in mind. I Always try to improve! :D

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O'Neil Donald @TheMerelyHuman

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Heart Lake Secondary School

Canada

Joined on 1/13/08

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