TheMerelyHuman's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[old version of Paper Dragon]

Perfect Score

Amazing melody, great use of countermelodies. What can I say, you have nailed everything that I usually massacre people on. Truly a great piece of work. The trumpet and flute worked together so well. I need this pack you have.

sorohanro responds:

trumpet i recorded myself (putting a mic. in the closet, between clothes, not to have echo)
and the flute is a loop found on net combined with some synth flute ... if i remember corectly ... that was almost 8 years ago, i think...

thanx for review

[Empty Brass]

Good Job

First off, I really like the main brass line. It carries the song. However, it does get repetitive. I'd suggest a pre-chorus change in the line. Secondly, I think you could have expounded much more melodicly. The Swizz Beatz style chants in the background were smart and gave the song more of a push to get people dancing. Remember that not onl percussion can be altered to change the style of the song (which you did very well). Like I say to almost every single person I review, experiment! But overall, it was a great idea. It does seem unfinished however.

Stone-Killa responds:

Yea i see wut u mean i might put all tipz in and resubmit

[So sick of love.. remake]

Amazing

First off, I love your voice. Your transitions from falsetto to full voice is nearly flawless. I wish I had your range. But, make sure you know what to do with that range. Show off the control in your voice that I know you have. Possibly some runs next time? Your sense of pitch is evidently well-rounded and I'm not even gonna touch the fact that some of the lyrics are wrong because it doesn't matter.

Second. Whoever played guitar is simply amazing. If it's you singing and playing at the same time, kudos to you. I loved how you stayed true to the song's R&B flow by the simpleness and avoiding chords. Very well done.

Inka-Wall responds:

you could do the same using your range... and of course it's just a matter of feelings. I try to use technical details just to give strenght to emotions. Technical details are useless if regardin only itself. My philosophy says : People listen music to have feelings... i give them my feelings. Thank you